STORY REVISION

Are you feeling overwhelmed by the revision process, unsure of how to transform your story into the polished, compelling piece you know it can be? Revision is challenging, but it doesn’t have to be a lonely or frustrating experience. What if you had a clear, confident path forward?

Introducing Story Revision

Imagine approaching your manuscript with clarity and purpose, understanding exactly what needs to be done to bring out its full potential. My Story Revision service helps you take a step back, gain perspective, and transform your rough draft into a polished narrative that captivates readers. Together, we’ll go beyond surface edits and address the core of your story, so you can revise with intention and confidence.

Your Journey to a Stronger Story

Many writers feel overwhelmed by the sheer scale of revisions—unsure of where to start or what to fix. Through our work together, you’ll learn how to evaluate your manuscript from a big-picture perspective, identifying the issues that matter most. By the end of this process, you’ll have a clear, actionable revision plan and the confidence to make your story stronger, clearer, and more compelling than ever before.

How It Works

We’ll work through your manuscript step-by-step, using proven tools from Story Development to guide you through every stage of revision. Through tailored feedback, deadlines, and ongoing consultations, you’ll gain a deeper understanding of what your story needs to truly resonate with readers. By the end, you’ll have a roadmap for revision and a polished start that will set the tone for the rest of your story.

The Transformation You’ll Experience:

• From Overwhelmed to Empowered: You’ll move from feeling lost in the revision process to having a clear, targeted plan for improvement.

• From Uncertain to Confident: Gain the insight and structure to make key decisions about what stays, what goes, and what needs refining in your story.

• From a Draft to a Clear Path Forward: Through high-level evaluation and in-depth feedback, you’ll understand your story’s strengths and areas for improvement.

• From Polishing to Perfection: You’ll receive developmental feedback on your first two chapters to ensure your story unfolds with the clarity and momentum to keep readers hooked.

Investment: $2400

Ready to Elevate Your Story?

Let’s take your manuscript from good to great. Contact me today, and together we’ll map out the revision process, transforming your draft into the compelling, polished story you’ve envisioned.

What Clients Are Saying:

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"Through his unique blend of kind and gentle guidance he'll give you all the confidence you’ll need. Not least, because he: knows what he’s talking about; will be constructively critical when necessary; and is brilliant at structuring, proof-reading and brainstorming. I’d say you’re lucky to have found him. He’ll make your journey so much more enjoyable." - Bella Cassidy, author of Shoot the Moon